Can someone read my poetry (there are 4 here)?

Your poems certainly don't lack in darkness I can say that much. However, some of them are well written. For instance your second poem, though simple, is quite beautiful. I think the reason for that poem's ability to be so well written is that it feels natural. Some of your poems feel like your trying to jam as many underlying themes and deep thoughts as possible, and they begin to lose the wonders of simplicity. You can make a poem about a single experience, but if you lose the general emotions and concepts within said event than it becomes harder for a reader to connect to that piece. You have great diction and meter, now I think you just need to work on the fine tuning. Keep at it, and try not to strive to be perfect either; perfect is boring. Great job.